A great rock song, you're on your way!
Great song, I love the energy that you put into this one. The only suggestion I have for you is to increase the volume on the vocals. Whoever the singer is has a nice calm voice with a nice tone for the style of music. May I suggest, as a professional vocalist, some vocal lessons to increase the vibrato and remove a little of the naisal sound. This would also increase the power of the voice and the ability to sing for longer periods of time. Great guitar and drum work as well, nice transitions from verse to chorus. Keep up the great work and keep on writing guys.
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